Verse Notes

'Advance Australia Fair II'

 

We acknowledge and honour the contribution of Judith Durham AO and Kutcha Edwards in their pioneering work of 2006 and 2009 ‘Lyric for contemporary Australia’. This commenced the movement in Australia for a new National Anthem.

Here are some notes on the main themes embraced in our proposed song, 'Advance Australia Fair 11'. They can be used as a teaching aid in schools and for public reference.

Australian Values:

Core Australian values are embodied throughout the new lyrics. The values of our Freedom, achieved through our democratic institutions and the rule of law; Inclusion and Respect for our First Peoples; our Cultural Diversity; Mateship; and a Fair Go; are at the heart of the new piece.

In ‘Advance Australia Fair 11’ the first verse of the present National Anthem is retained, but with a single and important change to line 2. The inappropriate and now outmoded word ‘young’ is removed and replaced with ‘one’. So the first two lines are sung: ‘Australians all let us rejoice, For we are one and free’. This is the only change to Verse 1.

Verse 2 of the present National Anthem is rarely sung, and few know the words. This model does not include the second verse. It is replaced by the new second and third verses. This creates an Anthem which is more relevant to the Australia of today, while retaining Verse 1 virtually unchanged except in a minor and positive way.

The new Verse 2 focusses on our Indigenous peoples and our journey towards reconciliation and reinforcement of our culturally inclusive values.

The new Verse 3 talks of our important values of Mateship, Freedom and a Fair-go, and seeks to paint a vision of hope for a new and better Australia.

Historical Links to the Old Song

Historical links to the traditional song are achieved by the familiar lyrics of Verse 1 and in the new Verses 2 & 3 by the music and refrain. All three verses are anchored with the traditional refrain concluding with Advance Australia Fair”. The new lines have been written as the song was first written by Peter Dodds McCormick in 1878 using the ‘Ballad Stanza’ format. A Ballad Stanza is a four-line stanza, known as a quatrain, most often found in the folk ballad. In this form, usually only the second and fourth lines rhyme in an a/b/c/b pattern. 


The New Proposed Lyrics – Verse by Verse

Verse  1: The Traditional Verse

Use of the word ‘one’ in combination with the phrase ‘Australians all’ celebrates strength in our unity in diversity and our inclusiveness as a multi-cultural a society, something in which we can truly rejoice. It says who we are in spirit and at our core and sets the key themes for the Verses 2 and 3 which follow.  

The word ‘free’ references strength in our basic freedoms and democratic institutions which are protected by the rule of law.

These core values are the envy of so many parts of the world where they are denied. It is through our democracy that we are free to advocate for positive change to correct failures in society, such as unacceptable incarceration rates of Indigenous citizens. As a Nation we find unity in our support for these principles and strength in our respect for them.

Prime Minister Bob Hawke agrees to a Makarrata peace making process in response to the representation made by Galarrwuy Yunupingu AM and Wenten Rubuntja AM contained in The Barunga Statement at the Barunga sports and cultural festival, about 80 k south-east of Katherine, during Australia’s bi-centennial year, 1988.

Prime Minister Bob Hawke agrees to a Makarrata peace making process in response to the representation made by Galarrwuy Yunupingu AM and Wenten Rubuntja AM contained in The Barunga Statement at the Barunga sports and cultural festival, about 80 k south-east of Katherine, during Australia’s bi-centennial year, 1988.

Verse  2: Our People

Verse 2 of the proposed Anthem is written as part of the truth telling process for the Nation.

It pays respect to and celebrates our First Peoples – their occupation of the continent and adjacent islands for 60,000 years or more, their culture, their survival and a declaration of peace as we work together towards reconciliation.

It also celebrates the value of inclusiveness in our multi-cultural society.

First Stanza

'For sixty thousand years and more,

First peoples of this land,

Sustained by Country, Dreamtime told

By word and artist’s hand.’


The map is a guide to the language, tribal and nation groups of the Aboriginal people of the Australian continent and Torres Strait Islands

The map is a guide to the language, tribal and nation groups of the Aboriginal people of the Australian continent and Torres Strait Islands

Here, the extensive occupation of our First Peoples is honoured. According to contemporary science, this occupation has been for 60,000 years or more.[1] These lines provide the principal recognition and inclusion element of the new lyrics. They say something of the breadth and extent of occupation by the First Nations of the Australian continent and adjacent islands.

The focus on Indigenous culture is referenced by the twin themes – the role of mother Country as the provider of all things, and the spiritual role of the sacred Dreamtime for our First Australians in explaining the world through the rich tradition of the stories passed down through the generations.

The reference to the Dreamtime being told ‘By word and artist’s hand’ calls upon Australians to engage in a learning process about the ancient Indigenous culture as part of the journey towards reconciliation.

‘Waving Hands’ – rock art gallery, Mount Borradaile, western Arnhem Land (photograph David Hancock)

‘Waving Hands’ – rock art gallery, Mount Borradaile, western Arnhem Land (photograph David Hancock)

The Dreamtime is central to the culture of our First Peoples. It’s great stories of creation represent the Aboriginal understanding of the world. It is the beginning of knowledge, from which came the laws of existence which must be observed for survival. The ancient stories of the Dreamtime were passed down by word of mouth for thousands of years. They were also represented in dance and song and in Australian Indigenous art, including rock art which survives to this day - representing the oldest unbroken tradition of art in the world created by the oldest living culture on Earth. 

The Indigenous culture of the Dreamtime is honoured in these lines.

Note:

[1] See: 'Uluru Statement from the Heart', May 2017, and the Final Report of the Referendum Council dated 17 June 2017, which notes '60,000 years or more' as the period when Indigenous occupation of Australia first began. Further, the 60,000 years plus period (BP 60,000+) has also recently been confirmed by a team of archaeologists and dating specialists led by Associate Professor Chris Clarkson from The University of Queensland School of Social Science, as detailed in the Nature journal published 20 July 2017. This discovery arises from the analysis of evidence derived from the Madjedbebe rock shelter, Kakadu. 306 Nature Vol 547, 20 July 2017.  

Second Stanza

Unite our cultures from afar

In peace with those first here

To walk together on this soil

Respect for all grows there.

The verse then moves to those who have immigrated to Australia and speaks of Australians becoming a nation which respects its ancient history and works together with new arrivals to achieve security and prosperity. These lines represent a prayer for inclusion of all members of our multi-cultural society and the movement towards a declaration of peace and reconciliation with our First Peoples.

Multi Cultural Choir – Harmony Day, Melbourne.

Multi Cultural Choir – Harmony Day, Melbourne.

‘Respect for all grows there’ speaks of the need to conduct our relationships with dignity and mutual respect and without discrimination.

The line To walk together on this soil was inspired by words spoken about the late Dr. G Yunupingu at the deeply moving memorial service for him in September 2017. Dr. Yunupingu was one of Australia's most famous Aboriginal musicians. He was an eminent Australian, providing a voice for indigenous Australians and fostering racial harmony. He received tributes from Australian Prime Minister Malcolm Turnbull, fellow musician Peter Garrett and the Dean of the Sydney Conservatorium of Music. Djungatjunga Yunupingu said this in his eulogy about his nephew: 

"He went into the world. He did. He wasn't fighting for himself. He wasn't talking for himself. He was talking for all Australians to unite and walk together."

Dr. Yunupingu is honoured in our lines.

 

Refrain

From everywhere on Earth we sing, Advance Australia Fair.

The second verse concludes with “From everywhere on Earth we sing” as an introduction to the refrain “Advance Australia Fair”. This line celebrates and emphasizes our successful multicultural Australian society of the 21st century.

Young immigrants disembarking, 1921

Young immigrants disembarking, 1921

Verse  3: Our Values of Mateship, Freedom and a Fair-go

Verse 3 celebrates our Australian values of Mateship, Freedom in our democracy, and a Fair-go. It concludes with a message of hope for the future.

First Stanza

In times of drought and flood and fire

When all but hope is gone

Australians join with helping hands

And wattle blooms again.

The first stanza acknowledges that times can be tough in Australia. Through natural disaster many lose everything in devastating circumstances. This is when Australians support each other and the core value of 'mateship' comes to the fore, representing the Australian strengths in  equality, loyalty, friendship and mutual support when it is needed.

The stanza ends on a positive note, with the assurance that, with sustained hard work and a helping hand from us all as mates, we pull through - 'And wattle blooms again'

The Mimili CFS brigade women are South Australia's first female Indigenous volunteer firefighting team. They capture the modern spirit of ‘mateship’ applying to everybody.

The Mimili CFS brigade women are South Australia's first female Indigenous volunteer firefighting team. They capture the modern spirit of ‘mateship’ applying to everybody.

'And wattle blooms again'

 

There are layers of meaning and symbolism expressed in the few words of this line “And wattle blooms again”.

The lyrics reference our natural bush - symbolized by the green and gold of the widespread Australian wattle. The golden wattle grows across Australia and is a symbol of unity.

The lyrics express the spirit of the Australian people. In times of disaster, by combining together to help each other as ‘mates’, we are able to restore the bush and ourselves. The natural resilience of wattle represents the fortitude of the Australian people when things get tough.

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The Golden Wattle (Acacia pycnantha Benth.) is also important because it is the Australian national flower, as proclaimed on 19 August 1988 by the then Governor-General, the Rt Hon Sir Ninian M Stephen AK GCMG GCVO KBE. When in flower, it displays our national colours, green and gold. [3]    

The Indigenous peoples of Australia from time immemorial made good use of the wattle. They soaked the gum of the golden wattle in water and honey to produce a sweet, toffee-like substance. The tannin from the bark was used for its antiseptic properties.

Finally, the green and gold are celebrated in our National sporting colours. They are worn with pride by our athletes on the sporting field, on the track, on the court, and in the swimming pool.    

Notes:

[3] Australian Government, Department of Prime Minister and Cabinet website  https://www.pmc.gov.au/government/australian-national-symbols/australian-floral-emblem (last observed 14 April 2018).

 Second Stanza

Tomorrow may this timeless land

Live for our young to share

From red-rock heart to sun-drenched shore

Our country free and fair.

The second stanza looks to the future. It concludes with a reference to our aspiration that in the future, in the hands of our children, we will be a free country and offer a 'fair go' to our citizens.

Line 7                          

From red-rock heart to sun-drenched shore

This line speaks of the extent and breadth of our home, the continent of Australia and adjacent islands, from sacred Uluru to our much-loved beaches on our sun-drenched shores.

Uluru, Central Australia

Uluru, Central Australia

'to sun-drenched shore.'

Shore of Mer (Murray Island), Torres Strait Islands, the birthplace of Eddie 'Koiko' Mabo.

Shore of Mer (Murray Island), Torres Strait Islands, the birthplace of Eddie 'Koiko' Mabo.

Final Refrain

Beneath the Southern Cross we sing, Advance Australia Fair.

These lines provide a rousing conclusion to the Anthem.

It takes in the Southern Cross star formation, an iconic Australian symbol reproduced on our flag. It is something that every Australian can experience on a clear night in the southern sky, as it was from time immemorial by our First People. 

The Southern Cross is a uniquely unifying and permanent symbol for all Australians. It is very special. On the death of Australia’s greatest balladist Banjo Paterson in 1941, Edward Harrington wrote a tribute to him in the Bulletin. It concluded with these words:

“As long as there’s a Southern Cross ‘The Banjo’ will not die.”

We all live under the Southern Cross, as did our First Australians for many thousands of years. The formation can be seen all year round from almost anywhere in the Country. The five stars of the Southern Cross are represented on the Australian flag, and it is referred to in the opening line of the second verse of the present National Anthem: “Beneath our radiant Southern Cross”.

The Southern Cross also played a prominent part in Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander astronomy. Indeed, it has been recently announced (Jan. 2018) that the International Astronomical Union has given the fifth-brightest and smallest visible star of the Cross the name “Ginan”, the name it has been called for generations by the Wardaman people of the Northern Territory in the Katherine region. For this people, Ginan represented a red dilly-bag filled with special songs of knowledge. There are numbers of other dreamtime Indigenous stories about the Southern Cross which have survived to this day from different parts of Australia.

The lyrics reinforce the theme of us finding 'unity in diversity'.

The refrain concludes with the traditional and familiar 'Advance Australia Fair'. ‘Fair’ refers to the importance of treating all people equally and without discrimination – in other words, giving everybody a ‘fair go’.

This works with the music in a way which provides a dignified and familiar anchoring refrain to draw all of the verses together.


What the new lyrics seek to achieve

The words of the patriotic song ‘Advance Australia Fair’ have never been set in stone.

The song has developed from the colonial era when it was first written in 1878, through to federation in 1901 when a replacement third verse was included to refer to the new Commonwealth, to about 1907 when new lines were added to the last verse to emphasize connection with Britain, to when it was substantially re-modelled in 1984 by producing a cut down version of the song (from four verses to two) and making it gender neutral in preparation for its adoption as the National Anthem.

At each stage, the words of the song have been changed in an attempt to reflect changes in the political and social fabric of the country. However, at each stage to date, our First Australians have not been acknowledged in the Anthem.

Today we live in a very different social environment. We are moving forward as a leading, inclusive, multi-cultural society of the 21st century which embraces all of its citizens.

We are also moving forward on a journey towards reconciliation when a 'declaration of peace' is called for. See Deborah Cheetham's opera 'Eumeralla - a War Requiem for Peace'.  

Perpetuation of hurt by exclusion has no place in our national hymn.

In this context, it would surely serve us well as Australians to speak though our National Anthem of who we are, what we stand for in our core values, and everything we celebrate in this great country of ours.

The re-vitalised Australian National Anthem proposed by RAP for the 21st century and beyond is offered for consideration as a means to achieve these ends – something in which we can truly ‘Rejoice.